Fic: qua torva res es (McKay/Sheppard, NC-17)

[sgasesa-admin.livejournal.com]

From scarlettandblue with love for silverraven11
The request silverraven11 made is at the end of the story. I hope I managed to deliver on some of what you wanted.
Beta read by maaseru who has done the most fabulous job ever under very trying circumstances, i.e., me taking a very long time to write a pretty long story! Thank you so much for all your help.
I also admit I fiddled with it again after it came back from its final beta reading, so any mistakes you spot are all me.

Warnings:
It's a sort of canon AU, in that this is an AU of an AU that canon created. Slash. Swearing and sex and a few owies for our dear boys. So pretty much NC17 I'd say....

Disclaimer:
And of course I don't own John or Rodney (I wish!!) or any of the SGA and SG1 crew,
or any Navajo Tribal Police officers from new Mexico. But playing with them is such fun and you shouldn't sue anyone for having fun, should you?

( qua torva res es )

Comments

[springwoof.livejournal.com]

Awesome AU! This is one of the best "Vegas" fics I've read. I loved what you did with AU John & Rodney. I liked how keeping Simmons around in Area 51 made this AU a lot darker and the SGC much more sinister. Jeannie and her family--especially the precocious Madison--were very enjoyable. And John and Rodney's instant, visceral connection was blazing hot! Very, very cool!

[scarlettandblue.livejournal.com]

Thatnk you
wow that is pretty amazing feedback thank you!
and I'm blushing now

I'm glad you liked Simmons, he makes a creditable bad guy in a way that is not too ott, because, hey, as far as he's concerned he's just doing his job!!!

Plus thank you for liking jeannie and co I was kind of unsure at first about the family aspect and Mads in particular so it's good to hear that worked for you.
I really appreciate this, thanks