Fic: The Dance
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sga_santaTitle: The Dance
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andromeda05
Characters: Weir/McKay
Spoilers: Past "Instinct"
Rating: R-NC-17
For:wisdomeagle
The Dance
It was Christmas eve, Elizabeth thought as she sat in front of the mirror trying to yet again get her hair to lay exactly as she wanted, she was dressed in a light jade floor length dress, black high heels. She sighed, it didn't matter how hard she tried, she couldn't get over how excited she was about this.
"Elizabeth?" came Teyla's voice, startling the Atlantis leader from her thoughts, she smiled softly.
"Come in Teyla," Elizabeth replied.
"You look lovely, are you ready to go?" Teyla was dressed in a dark purple dress that dipped just below her knees, it was no doubt to make John go wild. She smiled and nodded softly.
"I am, shall we."
*
"Where are they?" Rodney was getting antsy, John sighed and looked over at his best friend, they were all dressed in their finest out fits. This dance had been Elizabeth's idea, she wanted to have a Christmas that no one would likely forget, so she had decided to have her own little Christmas ball. So far over half of Atlantis and several Athosians had arrived to dance the night away on the fare city.
"They'll be here, try to relax," mumbled John as he fingered the wine glass in front of him. The guys from the Cafeteria had done an excellent job of making a fine dinner for everyone... assuming everyone finally arrived, they were waiting for a few more people. Dinner was served at seven, dancing for the rest of the evening.
"Bite me," muttered Rodney in return as he fiddled with his tie again.
"Rodney, leave it..." John's words trailed off as the doors to the converted ball room opened to see two beautiful women standing there.
"Wow," was all Rodney could utter as he looked at her, she was indeed gorgeous, the dress Elizabeth wore left little to the imagination, dipping low, but not enough to show Rodney all he wanted, her hips were clear cut in the thinning dress. Not to mention it matched her eyes almost perfectly, making them sparkle with light and excitement.
"They're beautiful," whispered Carson.
The two women seemed to float over to the table where they're boys sat, grinning they each took a seat next to their friends, "it's lovely to see you all here," Elizabeth said grinning.
"You..." Rodney found himself unable to speak, he wanted to tell her how perfect she looked, to tell her how terribly he wanted to sweep her up into his arms and twirl with her forever.
"You look beautiful Liz," John finally said, beating his friend to the punch that Rodney couldn't seem to find himself.
"Thank you John, you boys clean up nicely as well."
Dinner was a pleasant ordeal, Zelenka, Ronan, and Cadman chose to join them, and the eight friends enjoyed a lovely dinner. Rodney looked at Elizabeth, and was about to ask her to dance, when Zelenka beat her to the punch.
"I would love to dance," Elizabeth said grinning as she took her friend's hand. Rodney watched Zelenka sweep her onto the dance floor, guiding gracefully. Her presence alone, however was graceful.
"Teyla... may I have this dance?" John spoke up.
"Of course John," Teyla allowed John to take her hand, leaving the others behind.
*
Rodney sighed, it was nearing midnight, he'd danced with Teyla and even Cadman, but every time he went to intercept Elizabeth and get a dance with her, someone would jump in and steal her away for yet another dance.
"Rodney, just go cut in, ye've been waitin' all night," Carson finally said.
"I... I..." he shook his head. Rodney smiled softly as he heard the beginnings of the next song just as he approached her side, "Elizabeth..." he began and paused as the words began to flow from the speakers.
It's late in the evening
She's wonderin' what clothes to wear
She puts on her make-up
And brushes her long blonde hair
"Can I have this dance?" he knew how cheesy it sounded, but as she nodded slowly and took his hand, Rodney couldn't help but smile. He pulled her close, his hand in the small of her bare back. They gracefully swayed to the music.
"So... how do I look?" Elizabeth asked, knowing the next phrase to the song with a grin on her face.
And then she asks me, "Do I look all right?"
And I say yes, you look wonderful tonight
"You look wonderful tonight Elizabeth," Rodney returned with a soft grin in return.
We go to a party
And everyone turns to see
This beautiful lady
walkin around with me
"The night is almost over, it's been a real hit, thank you Rodney, for helping make this night come true," Elizabeth whispered.
Rodney smiled and pulled her close, feeling her head lean against his shoulder. Sighing, he rested his head against her, "it was your dream... I just made it come true."
"I don't want this to end." Elizabeth murmured.
And then she asks me, "Do you feel all right?"
And I say yes, I feel wonderful tonight
"I never wanted this night to end... you look so beautiful..." he shook his head gently, reaching out he gently pushed a strand of hair behind her ear.
"Rodney..." she began.
"I love you," he whispered suddenly, unsure where it had come from, suddenly he found himself leaning forward, pressing his lips to her's.
She instantly responded by inching closer, pressing her lips to his, their tongues dancing as they held one another, still dancing to the music. He finally pulled away, breathing heavily, lips swollen but a smile gracing the reddened lips, "I love you."
"I love you too, I have for a very long time."
It's time to go home now
And I've got an achin' head
So I give her the car keys
And she helps me to bed
And then I tell her
As I turn out the light
I say my darlin', you were wonderful tonight
Oh, my darlin, you were wonderful tonight
"Okay everyone," John's voice broke over the system as the song finally came to an end, Rodney continued to hold Elizabeth in his arms for a few more minutes. "One last song, for those Athosians who don't know much about Christmas... well all I can tell you is... it's a beautiful thing, and for those of us who want to be home, or can be home... this one is for you..."
I'll be home for Christmas
You can plan on me
Please have snow and mistletoe
And presents on the tree
Rodney smiled as Frank Sinatra's voice floated over the entire room. He looked at Elizabeth and saw her eyes filling with tears, "What's wrong?"
"This was my father's favorite song," she whispered smiling softly.
"He's here Liz, right now."
Christmas Eve will find me
Where the lovelight gleams
I'll be home for Christmas
If only in my dreams
"Come with me..." Elizabeth said spontaneously as the song began to end.
"Liz..."
"Rodney, just this once, be with me, lets enjoy this night for what it is, enjoy each other..." She gently stroked his cheek and smiled.
He couldn't resist her, but that smile was killing him, he nodded quickly. They made their way back to her room. She opened the door with her gentle touch, closing it quickly behind her.
"Thank you for the beautiful night," he pressed his lips to hers again. Their hands beginning to roam everywhere, he found himself unable to control anything anymore as he slipped the two spaghetti straps from her freckled shoulders, without missing a beat he allowed her to strip off his jacket and shirt.
He reached around her back and unzipped the dress, it pooled around their feet as she slowly backed him against the bed, he sat down, stunned when she finally pulled away. With a grin she removed the bra, she then pushed him on his back, scooting further on the bed, and straddled his hips. She dipped down, pressing her lips to his again.
He smiled into her lips as he gently began to play with her nipples, he broke the kiss, and moved down to take one of her breasts in his lips, he was gentle at first, swirling his tongue around it, teasing, then biting and nipping, causing her to grin as she moaned to him.
She smiled as she caught his mouth again, her hands coming between their bodies, she could feel his engorged penis beneath his pants and boxers, grinning she began to rub the length, causing him to moan in pleasure, with another soft grin she pulled away, still straddling his hips, she reached out and gently unbuckled the pants, unzipping them with agonizing slowness, he removed the pants.
His eyes remained on her the entire time, her beauty, he had to choke back a gasp when he felt her gently but firmly grasp his penis in her hand. "Oh... god," he whispered as she began to stroke the already erect penis. "Keep... that up and this won't last long," he managed between gasps of pleasure.
Chuckling softly she removed his boxers, then looked at him. He grinned, and easily slid the panties she was wearing to the floor, they took each other in. She stretched out on top of him again, smiling as she felt his length on her thigh, she captured his mouth again.
Rodney grinned as his hang slipped between them this time, he grinned when she gasped as one finger entered her. Pumping lightly he then added a second one, amazed that she was already hot and wet. He continued to stroke, finding a rhythm, she cried out softly, not wanting anyone else to hear them just yet. He rubbed her firmly, and felt her release. Grinning at her he looked at her, with a confirming nod he then reached for his hard penis, at the edge of her opening, he began to press forward.
"Oh... you're perfect," she whimpered as he slid in all the way.
She was busy fondling his balls for a few moments, before they started the rhythm, she sat up higher, allowing him to do most of the work, as he slid in as far as he could then out, hitting her harder each time, faster.
They both came at the same time, continuing as they slowed the pace down a little, finally coming to a halt she remained on him, allowing him to stay inside of her as she reached back for another kiss.
"I really love you," he whispered as he stroked her cheek with his finger.
"I love you too," she replied.
Tomorrow would bring another day on Atlantis, where they would have to act casual, but tonight had been theirs... she looked over at the clock and chuckled, "Merry Christmas Rodney."
"Merry Christmas Liz," he whispered before they both fell into a fitful sleep at each other's sides.
End
Author:
andromeda05Characters: Weir/McKay
Spoilers: Past "Instinct"
Rating: R-NC-17
For:
wisdomeagleThe Dance
It was Christmas eve, Elizabeth thought as she sat in front of the mirror trying to yet again get her hair to lay exactly as she wanted, she was dressed in a light jade floor length dress, black high heels. She sighed, it didn't matter how hard she tried, she couldn't get over how excited she was about this.
"Elizabeth?" came Teyla's voice, startling the Atlantis leader from her thoughts, she smiled softly.
"Come in Teyla," Elizabeth replied.
"You look lovely, are you ready to go?" Teyla was dressed in a dark purple dress that dipped just below her knees, it was no doubt to make John go wild. She smiled and nodded softly.
"I am, shall we."
*
"Where are they?" Rodney was getting antsy, John sighed and looked over at his best friend, they were all dressed in their finest out fits. This dance had been Elizabeth's idea, she wanted to have a Christmas that no one would likely forget, so she had decided to have her own little Christmas ball. So far over half of Atlantis and several Athosians had arrived to dance the night away on the fare city.
"They'll be here, try to relax," mumbled John as he fingered the wine glass in front of him. The guys from the Cafeteria had done an excellent job of making a fine dinner for everyone... assuming everyone finally arrived, they were waiting for a few more people. Dinner was served at seven, dancing for the rest of the evening.
"Bite me," muttered Rodney in return as he fiddled with his tie again.
"Rodney, leave it..." John's words trailed off as the doors to the converted ball room opened to see two beautiful women standing there.
"Wow," was all Rodney could utter as he looked at her, she was indeed gorgeous, the dress Elizabeth wore left little to the imagination, dipping low, but not enough to show Rodney all he wanted, her hips were clear cut in the thinning dress. Not to mention it matched her eyes almost perfectly, making them sparkle with light and excitement.
"They're beautiful," whispered Carson.
The two women seemed to float over to the table where they're boys sat, grinning they each took a seat next to their friends, "it's lovely to see you all here," Elizabeth said grinning.
"You..." Rodney found himself unable to speak, he wanted to tell her how perfect she looked, to tell her how terribly he wanted to sweep her up into his arms and twirl with her forever.
"You look beautiful Liz," John finally said, beating his friend to the punch that Rodney couldn't seem to find himself.
"Thank you John, you boys clean up nicely as well."
Dinner was a pleasant ordeal, Zelenka, Ronan, and Cadman chose to join them, and the eight friends enjoyed a lovely dinner. Rodney looked at Elizabeth, and was about to ask her to dance, when Zelenka beat her to the punch.
"I would love to dance," Elizabeth said grinning as she took her friend's hand. Rodney watched Zelenka sweep her onto the dance floor, guiding gracefully. Her presence alone, however was graceful.
"Teyla... may I have this dance?" John spoke up.
"Of course John," Teyla allowed John to take her hand, leaving the others behind.
*
Rodney sighed, it was nearing midnight, he'd danced with Teyla and even Cadman, but every time he went to intercept Elizabeth and get a dance with her, someone would jump in and steal her away for yet another dance.
"Rodney, just go cut in, ye've been waitin' all night," Carson finally said.
"I... I..." he shook his head. Rodney smiled softly as he heard the beginnings of the next song just as he approached her side, "Elizabeth..." he began and paused as the words began to flow from the speakers.
It's late in the evening
She's wonderin' what clothes to wear
She puts on her make-up
And brushes her long blonde hair
"Can I have this dance?" he knew how cheesy it sounded, but as she nodded slowly and took his hand, Rodney couldn't help but smile. He pulled her close, his hand in the small of her bare back. They gracefully swayed to the music.
"So... how do I look?" Elizabeth asked, knowing the next phrase to the song with a grin on her face.
And then she asks me, "Do I look all right?"
And I say yes, you look wonderful tonight
"You look wonderful tonight Elizabeth," Rodney returned with a soft grin in return.
We go to a party
And everyone turns to see
This beautiful lady
walkin around with me
"The night is almost over, it's been a real hit, thank you Rodney, for helping make this night come true," Elizabeth whispered.
Rodney smiled and pulled her close, feeling her head lean against his shoulder. Sighing, he rested his head against her, "it was your dream... I just made it come true."
"I don't want this to end." Elizabeth murmured.
And then she asks me, "Do you feel all right?"
And I say yes, I feel wonderful tonight
"I never wanted this night to end... you look so beautiful..." he shook his head gently, reaching out he gently pushed a strand of hair behind her ear.
"Rodney..." she began.
"I love you," he whispered suddenly, unsure where it had come from, suddenly he found himself leaning forward, pressing his lips to her's.
She instantly responded by inching closer, pressing her lips to his, their tongues dancing as they held one another, still dancing to the music. He finally pulled away, breathing heavily, lips swollen but a smile gracing the reddened lips, "I love you."
"I love you too, I have for a very long time."
It's time to go home now
And I've got an achin' head
So I give her the car keys
And she helps me to bed
And then I tell her
As I turn out the light
I say my darlin', you were wonderful tonight
Oh, my darlin, you were wonderful tonight
"Okay everyone," John's voice broke over the system as the song finally came to an end, Rodney continued to hold Elizabeth in his arms for a few more minutes. "One last song, for those Athosians who don't know much about Christmas... well all I can tell you is... it's a beautiful thing, and for those of us who want to be home, or can be home... this one is for you..."
I'll be home for Christmas
You can plan on me
Please have snow and mistletoe
And presents on the tree
Rodney smiled as Frank Sinatra's voice floated over the entire room. He looked at Elizabeth and saw her eyes filling with tears, "What's wrong?"
"This was my father's favorite song," she whispered smiling softly.
"He's here Liz, right now."
Christmas Eve will find me
Where the lovelight gleams
I'll be home for Christmas
If only in my dreams
"Come with me..." Elizabeth said spontaneously as the song began to end.
"Liz..."
"Rodney, just this once, be with me, lets enjoy this night for what it is, enjoy each other..." She gently stroked his cheek and smiled.
He couldn't resist her, but that smile was killing him, he nodded quickly. They made their way back to her room. She opened the door with her gentle touch, closing it quickly behind her.
"Thank you for the beautiful night," he pressed his lips to hers again. Their hands beginning to roam everywhere, he found himself unable to control anything anymore as he slipped the two spaghetti straps from her freckled shoulders, without missing a beat he allowed her to strip off his jacket and shirt.
He reached around her back and unzipped the dress, it pooled around their feet as she slowly backed him against the bed, he sat down, stunned when she finally pulled away. With a grin she removed the bra, she then pushed him on his back, scooting further on the bed, and straddled his hips. She dipped down, pressing her lips to his again.
He smiled into her lips as he gently began to play with her nipples, he broke the kiss, and moved down to take one of her breasts in his lips, he was gentle at first, swirling his tongue around it, teasing, then biting and nipping, causing her to grin as she moaned to him.
She smiled as she caught his mouth again, her hands coming between their bodies, she could feel his engorged penis beneath his pants and boxers, grinning she began to rub the length, causing him to moan in pleasure, with another soft grin she pulled away, still straddling his hips, she reached out and gently unbuckled the pants, unzipping them with agonizing slowness, he removed the pants.
His eyes remained on her the entire time, her beauty, he had to choke back a gasp when he felt her gently but firmly grasp his penis in her hand. "Oh... god," he whispered as she began to stroke the already erect penis. "Keep... that up and this won't last long," he managed between gasps of pleasure.
Chuckling softly she removed his boxers, then looked at him. He grinned, and easily slid the panties she was wearing to the floor, they took each other in. She stretched out on top of him again, smiling as she felt his length on her thigh, she captured his mouth again.
Rodney grinned as his hang slipped between them this time, he grinned when she gasped as one finger entered her. Pumping lightly he then added a second one, amazed that she was already hot and wet. He continued to stroke, finding a rhythm, she cried out softly, not wanting anyone else to hear them just yet. He rubbed her firmly, and felt her release. Grinning at her he looked at her, with a confirming nod he then reached for his hard penis, at the edge of her opening, he began to press forward.
"Oh... you're perfect," she whimpered as he slid in all the way.
She was busy fondling his balls for a few moments, before they started the rhythm, she sat up higher, allowing him to do most of the work, as he slid in as far as he could then out, hitting her harder each time, faster.
They both came at the same time, continuing as they slowed the pace down a little, finally coming to a halt she remained on him, allowing him to stay inside of her as she reached back for another kiss.
"I really love you," he whispered as he stroked her cheek with his finger.
"I love you too," she replied.
Tomorrow would bring another day on Atlantis, where they would have to act casual, but tonight had been theirs... she looked over at the clock and chuckled, "Merry Christmas Rodney."
"Merry Christmas Liz," he whispered before they both fell into a fitful sleep at each other's sides.
End
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Date: 2005-12-21 07:25 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2005-12-24 12:53 am (UTC)What did you mean by this: Sighing, he rested his head against her, "it was your dream... I just made it come true." Did Rodney do something, like get the sound system working or did you mean just the two of them getting together?
I wonder why you said "before they both fell into a fitful sleep at each other's sides." "Fitful" is not the word I would have used here. It means "intermittently stopping and starting" and implies to me that they weren't comfortable. I would have thought they fell into a deep and soothing sleep after all that.
Beta moment: "they were all dressed in their finest out fits" should be "outfits"
Again, excellent writing.
~anonymouse
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Date: 2005-12-24 12:55 am (UTC)~anonymouse