Thanks, it's always nice to know that readers percieve the story the way I intended it to be. I wasn't quite sure at first if I should leave John's part in there, but thought the ending would be a bit too sad without it. After all it was a christmas gift and I try not to depress people if I can help it and I simply love happy endings :-)
I will post a revised version of the story, including two more parts as soon as I've finished them, and I'm looking forward to any future comments on it. have a nice day and enjoy the new episodes
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Date: 2007-01-23 10:37 pm (UTC)I will post a revised version of the story, including two more parts as soon as I've finished them, and I'm looking forward to any future comments on it.
have a nice day and enjoy the new episodes