I don't think he's getting as far as he would like. He keeps picking fights with Jeannie and the other scientists, and Jackson wades right into the middle of it every time.
I love this part. The way you wrote it and that John said it at all. It always makes me happy when John talks about feelings, and while the feelings in question here aren't his, it still counts.
I couldn't quite follow what the multiverse was up to, but actually that confusion helped sell it, because when is a portal to another universe ever going to be all that comfortable? Daniel and Rodney working together is always good stuff, and I really like the mood you create with the camp and the weather and the cenotaphs.
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Date: 2012-12-30 11:55 pm (UTC)I love this part. The way you wrote it and that John said it at all. It always makes me happy when John talks about feelings, and while the feelings in question here aren't his, it still counts.
I couldn't quite follow what the multiverse was up to, but actually that confusion helped sell it, because when is a portal to another universe ever going to be all that comfortable? Daniel and Rodney working together is always good stuff, and I really like the mood you create with the camp and the weather and the cenotaphs.