Very good excellent fic, I just have one compliant, I want to see the scenes with Jeannie and Ronon. I admit that it wouldn't have worked with the narrative flow but maybe you could do a deleted scene, or have someone else write that bit if you don't want to?
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Date: 2005-12-31 07:22 am (UTC)