I really liked it, the way they all fit together, made sense together in a way that they didn't alone. My favorite part has to be the Rodney/Ronon relationship, how each complements the other. Ronon grounds Rodney, while Rodney -- "He breathed Rodney in and let himself relax, the one place he could, in this room with this man who could explain the world to him and make it make sense. He let himself breathe." perfect line. The John/Rodney part got shorted, which I dunno, seemed OK to me b/c the focus of it all seemed to be Ronon. Even John's POV doesn't really scream with his personality, while Ronon's does. And my favorite scene has to be the one where Rodney wakes up to a calm morning with Ronon.
A cool story with all sorts of feelings and entanglements -- and I have a thing for OT3 with Rodney as the center person. Thank you!
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Date: 2005-12-25 10:42 pm (UTC)A cool story with all sorts of feelings and entanglements -- and I have a thing for OT3 with Rodney as the center person. Thank you!