I am really sorry that this took me so long to read, but I'm so glad I finally read it. LOOOOOVE the action at the beginning. You have John's voice and all the characters voice very well. John's reaction and his actions were truly his. You have so many great lines here. But the John and Teyla shipper in me simply loves the end.
Thank you SOOOO MUCH! A keeper to read for many cold nights. LOVE IT! *smooch*
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Date: 2012-02-01 02:09 am (UTC)Thank you SOOOO MUCH! A keeper to read for many cold nights. LOVE IT!
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