Yay! McShep + female from Earth! Thank you so much, Secret Santa! Wishes do come true!
This was really really lovely! The team interactions were so adorable and cute. I just love to read about the four of them showing how much they all mean to each other in their unique ways. And seriously, John + Rodney + Torren = made of win! The picture of John with Torren on his lap, so so cute!
And Miranda. :D What an incredible woman! Loved how she stood up to Rodney and that John thought of her as a female McKay and that they had same interests (go Johnny Cash!).
Also loved that you changed POVs. Showed the feelings (the boys' pining! yay!) they had (or were developing) for each other nicely.
And the end was just really perfect. How Miranda got both boys hot and bothered both because of herself and because of John's and Rodney's attraction towards one another. Would have loved to read how everything progresses inside but I get why you ended it right there.
I'm so happy right now! I didn't really expect that 'my' author would write me this particular kind of story and pairing so you really exceeded my expectations here! Thank you very much, dear Santa!
You think I could wheedle you into writing a sequel? ;) Maybe with Miranda finding out about the boys' base and so? ;)
Oh, and one more thing: I can totally picture Ronon in a mosh pit as well but on a hip-hop dance floor? Not so much. Maybe Amelia will have to show him other locations next time. ;)
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Date: 2011-12-18 09:24 pm (UTC)This was really really lovely! The team interactions were so adorable and cute. I just love to read about the four of them showing how much they all mean to each other in their unique ways. And seriously, John + Rodney + Torren = made of win! The picture of John with Torren on his lap, so so cute!
And Miranda. :D What an incredible woman! Loved how she stood up to Rodney and that John thought of her as a female McKay and that they had same interests (go Johnny Cash!).
Also loved that you changed POVs. Showed the feelings (the boys' pining! yay!) they had (or were developing) for each other nicely.
And the end was just really perfect. How Miranda got both boys hot and bothered both because of herself and because of John's and Rodney's attraction towards one another. Would have loved to read how everything progresses inside but I get why you ended it right there.
I'm so happy right now! I didn't really expect that 'my' author would write me this particular kind of story and pairing so you really exceeded my expectations here! Thank you very much, dear Santa!
You think I could wheedle you into writing a sequel? ;) Maybe with Miranda finding out about the boys' base and so? ;)
Oh, and one more thing: I can totally picture Ronon in a mosh pit as well but on a hip-hop dance floor? Not so much. Maybe Amelia will have to show him other locations next time. ;)