Oh, this is aweful, in that it leaves me full of awe. Seriously, tears just spilled out of my eyes at the end. You've done a wonderful job of fleshing out Ronon and Teyla, making them unique while still really illustrating how they have that common bond of being misplaced in their worlds. And I loved the John and Teyla interactions, too.
This is just a really beautiful story. Thank you for writing it.
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Date: 2005-12-21 06:39 pm (UTC)This is just a really beautiful story. Thank you for writing it.