Date: 2010-12-20 07:34 pm (UTC)
Your Ronon POV is perfect, and I loved seeing Earth from his perspective. Loved the teaminess! You did a great job showing each character, how they are as individuals and how they are as a team. Really enjoyed seeing Torren, too. The Fourteenth are a scary enemy and I was shocked that they shot at a baby. Enjoyed the story very much!
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