This was charming; the Ronon-POV (his disdain for lunchmeats and pasta, hee), the teaminess, the subtle/understated McShep, the driving and motorcycle lessons, and the Earth-as-a-hostile-planet concept. Agree with other commenters -- hope you have time and interest in adding a sequel later. :)
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Date: 2010-12-18 07:09 pm (UTC)