I love it, my only complaint is that is it waaay too short :-) I'd love a sequel. That's my usual reaction to something I really like. It's plausible. And teamy!
And - the Fourteenth? Do they insist or did you invent them? 'Cause if you did, that's inspired.
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Date: 2010-12-17 07:45 pm (UTC)And - the Fourteenth? Do they insist or did you invent them? 'Cause if you did, that's inspired.