I loved your alternate take on Mitchell. I would love to see more of that messed-up yet strangely charming character. He has a dragon-wish in this story. Perhaps it should be fulfilled?
Sobal's reaction to everything made so much sense, and Jeanie and Evan's blossoming relationship is so cute! Jeanine and Rodney's conversation in the infirmary made me cry, btw. "You fill all the spaces she left behind" is now officially one of my favourite lines. :)
Fantastic, interesting and incredibly creative story! Well done!
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Date: 2010-12-18 03:45 am (UTC)I loved your alternate take on Mitchell. I would love to see more of that messed-up yet strangely charming character. He has a dragon-wish in this story. Perhaps it should be fulfilled?
Sobal's reaction to everything made so much sense, and Jeanie and Evan's blossoming relationship is so cute! Jeanine and Rodney's conversation in the infirmary made me cry, btw. "You fill all the spaces she left behind" is now officially one of my favourite lines. :)
Fantastic, interesting and incredibly creative story! Well done!
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