Thank you, Santa, for writing a story for me! =) I really appreciate it; I know inspiration can be very hard to come by.
The premise is very interesting! I admit that the chronology and the repetitiveness threw me off a bit earlier on, but the way you resolved those issues in the end was one of those "Aha!" moments—suddenly, some of your earlier artistic decisions made sense in the context of atmosphere, déjà vu, and the disjointed nature of memories. I love the idea of John and Teyla's love being such a unique entity to the Geodes. And of course, I always love that Ronon is pretty much the #1 fan in John and Teyla's fan club, lol!
Now, I have some interesting ideas to think about! =) Thanks, again!
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Date: 2009-12-24 09:56 am (UTC)The premise is very interesting! I admit that the chronology and the repetitiveness threw me off a bit earlier on, but the way you resolved those issues in the end was one of those "Aha!" moments—suddenly, some of your earlier artistic decisions made sense in the context of atmosphere, déjà vu, and the disjointed nature of memories. I love the idea of John and Teyla's love being such a unique entity to the Geodes. And of course, I always love that Ronon is pretty much the #1 fan in John and Teyla's fan club, lol!
Now, I have some interesting ideas to think about! =) Thanks, again!