Oh WOW. I mean, wow. Plot!!! And they're still them! I really like having an AU where J&R don't have some sort of instantaneous unique connection, but where it has to *grow*, like a real feeling. And O'Neill is a scream.
The OCs are excellent, fitting in flawlessly and not (as too often happens) hijacking the plot to lecture the characters on what they should be doing/feeling. The setting, the mistakes, the banter and the rubbing each other wrong, the h/c, it's all good.
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Date: 2009-12-21 06:00 pm (UTC)The OCs are excellent, fitting in flawlessly and not (as too often happens) hijacking the plot to lecture the characters on what they should be doing/feeling. The setting, the mistakes, the banter and the rubbing each other wrong, the h/c, it's all good.
Santa been good to us this year.