I love the repetition of John telling him to hurry; the feeling of rushing through Rodney growing up that that generates. Gorgeous story all round, as well as a little heart-wrenching!
I like that Rodney teaches Jeannie enough that she's an AI too :)
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Date: 2009-12-24 12:54 pm (UTC)I like that Rodney teaches Jeannie enough that she's an AI too :)