This is so amazing! The pacing and unfolding is perfect and then the REVEAL! Wow. And we see so little John, and know so little about what's happened with him- I'm amazed at how well I seem to know anyway, how much emotion you were able to put in with so little space and no infodumping.
I love Jeannie here, Jeannie figuring it out first and Jeannie getting a bigger role than John intended.
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Date: 2009-12-20 06:52 pm (UTC)I love Jeannie here, Jeannie figuring it out first and Jeannie getting a bigger role than John intended.