Fun team fic! I especially appreciated "So," Sheppard said, suddenly serious and sounding apologetic, "on the planet, I didn't know - " since one of my least favorite moments in the show was when, while hallucinating, John shot Ronon and Rodney and then only sarcastically apologized for it. This moment in your story was a relief to that long-nursed grudge! It made me grin that Ronon's idea was watching things, too. :-)
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Date: 2009-12-24 12:23 pm (UTC)