I like how you showed John's deteriorating mental state. He starts off okay, but soon he's talking to himself and drawing on the walls -- and that was a clever explanation for why he had so many Sharpies in his pocket!
I also enjoyed how clingy he was after being rescued. Nice h/c.
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Date: 2010-02-27 08:21 pm (UTC)I also enjoyed how clingy he was after being rescued. Nice h/c.