Date: 2009-12-17 03:17 am (UTC)
Fantastic story. It does have some elements similar to Solitary, but it's also a unique story in its own right. I loved your John's POV, and his loneliness, boredom and privation were so well-written that for awhile there I was waiting for his rescue to turn out to be some kind of hallucination or torture. I'm glad I was wrong. :)

I really enjoyed this. Thank you.
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