I'm so glad you that scene worked for you! I must admit that re-reading the story (in anticipation of finally finally replying to comments) I thought it was ridiculously schmoopy (I mean, seriously John, get it together), but he was really tired. And like, not expecting to be in love with Rodney McKay. Anyways, thanks again for the comment, and sorry for the super long delay in my response.
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Date: 2010-10-08 06:19 am (UTC)