Very cool story! The toll of sitting in the chair and then the slow bleed into his chest, his increasing discomfort then confusion, then blurring of past and presnt...this was all so wonderfully paced - it really drew me into the story. And great team moments of them helping John and being by his side.
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Date: 2010-01-02 06:22 am (UTC)