OOh, very good. I really like this fic, and all of the team's interactions. And John trying his best to help his team survive. I also liked the insight into John's past.
having a DR in front of my name This is minor, but i think changing DR to Dr. might help people get the joke on the first read. I read it as D R, went 'huh?' and then realized he meant Dr.
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Date: 2009-12-17 10:24 pm (UTC)having a DR in front of my name
This is minor, but i think changing DR to Dr. might help people get the joke on the first read. I read it as D R, went 'huh?' and then realized he meant Dr.