Date: 2009-12-20 04:20 am (UTC)
That was fascinating and insightful. Everyone acted in ways that felt realistic for them. I can see Keller making this kind of mistake, not because she is a horrible person, but because she is so young - and everyone is guilty of doing stupid stuff when they're young.

John was especially well drawn. Keeping this kind of secret is so damaging. I really could see John doing something this hurtful. He isn't a villain either, just really screwed up.

Really wonderful story.
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