Okay, this is *really* good. You did a great job with characterization and plot. I honestly felt the most for John in this fic. Yes, a lot of people got hurt by his silence, but that would have happened *anyway*. It was a no-win situation. He was trying to be a friend to both parties and that rarely works.
I do hope Cam can forgive him someday. He was the one truely innocent person in the whole mess but probably the one who could most understand John's reasonings and see the situation with a bit more perspective than anyone else.
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Date: 2009-12-17 01:13 am (UTC)I do hope Cam can forgive him someday. He was the one truely innocent person in the whole mess but probably the one who could most understand John's reasonings and see the situation with a bit more perspective than anyone else.