This was wonderful! Angst is most definitely emotional whump. I loved the inner thoughts of each team member (great job on their voices - spot on) but most especially Teyla's - her concern for her teammates, her knowledge of how they would react, her frustration at not being able to comfort them until they came to her.
Going fishing in Carson's honor (of course Teyla would come up with it) was a lovely tribute to him, and the way they are so cognizant of how each other is dealing is terrific.
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Date: 2009-12-15 07:17 pm (UTC)This was wonderful! Angst is most definitely emotional whump. I loved the inner thoughts of each team member (great job on their voices - spot on) but most especially Teyla's - her concern for her teammates, her knowledge of how they would react, her frustration at not being able to comfort them until they came to her.
Going fishing in Carson's honor (of course Teyla would come up with it) was a lovely tribute to him, and the way they are so cognizant of how each other is dealing is terrific.
There was no grumbling or complaining from McKay.
Ronon didn't like it, it wasn't right.
"So, you gutting the fish, McKay?" he asked.
THIS! I'm still laughing. So perfectly Ronon.