This was great fun. I always love seeing female-centric fic in this fandom. All the character voices were great, and you really developed a lot of personality for Banks, Vega, Reynolds, and Vendross in a fairly small space.
I also enjoyed this culture/planet you created, and the exploration of how various cultures value different things & have different needs, and how that's true not just as a distinction between Pegasus and Milky Way but between Pegasus cultures as well. Very cool.
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Date: 2009-01-12 10:52 pm (UTC)I also enjoyed this culture/planet you created, and the exploration of how various cultures value different things & have different needs, and how that's true not just as a distinction between Pegasus and Milky Way but between Pegasus cultures as well. Very cool.