A wonderfully, long, fantastic story. I loved that it is John/Rodney but totally a team story as well. And what an adventure, walking an entire continent.
I loved how we get to know so much more about them, and they about each other, in their long trek. And Rodney's concern that his team (and John!) may wish no more of him after such a long time. And poor Teyla's breakdown over missing moments of Torren's life. All such good angst and showing the friendships between them.
I, too, would love an epilogue of their return, Teyla's reunion, and just their joy of the simple things like bathing or eating jello.
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Date: 2008-12-30 07:28 pm (UTC)I loved how we get to know so much more about them, and they about each other, in their long trek. And Rodney's concern that his team (and John!) may wish no more of him after such a long time. And poor Teyla's breakdown over missing moments of Torren's life. All such good angst and showing the friendships between them.
I, too, would love an epilogue of their return, Teyla's reunion, and just their joy of the simple things like bathing or eating jello.