Very well-constructed and fun. I liked your choice of Shep whump and having John suffer through Rodney's dazed verbal attacks. Nice infirmary follow-up and banter. Love the comfort that is brought by the strong bond between the team members. We felt Ronon's loyalty early on when he was new...it is just in his character to have that bond once he trusts someone. - Diane, IN
School Daze
Date: 2009-01-03 06:58 pm (UTC)