The balance between John's flight away, and Rodney's race towards are just riveting, and the realisation of what is really going on, only to have the Trust leap into the fray... The 'little' sting at the end: 'first do no harm' was a very neat touch. Of course the Trust thought it didn't mean anything.
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Date: 2008-12-24 11:13 pm (UTC)The balance between John's flight away, and Rodney's race towards are just riveting, and the realisation of what is really going on, only to have the Trust leap into the fray... The 'little' sting at the end: 'first do no harm' was a very neat touch. Of course the Trust thought it didn't mean anything.
I've already re-read it twice, thank you so much!