I really liked this story. The fear for Rodney at the beginning, and the fear for John, Teyla and Ronon. Lia was a wonderful character. I loved her comment about not being old enough to drive. I really enjoyed this story.
I do have a few questions. Is there going to be a sequel? Did Rodney fix the AI more than the patch he added after finding John? Did they bring a generator? You showed how angry the Atlantians were when Rodney and John finally got to them, so I didn't think much was done at that time, but Rodney would not want to leave Lia and the rest of her people unprotected?
I would love to read more. There are so many various emotions that everyone must be feeling, that could complicate everything. Please write more.
![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
Broadcast Signal
Date: 2009-01-01 10:16 am (UTC)I do have a few questions. Is there going to be a sequel? Did Rodney fix the AI more than the patch he added after finding John? Did they bring a generator? You showed how angry the Atlantians were when Rodney and John finally got to them, so I didn't think much was done at that time, but Rodney would not want to leave Lia and the rest of her people unprotected?
I would love to read more. There are so many various emotions that everyone must be feeling, that could complicate everything. Please write more.