Hee, I'm certain I know who you are! Your writing and plot was smooth, if eyes could lick mine would have been doing it to the screen while reading this story. I enjoyed how SF this felt, how John feels so alone at the beginning, the messed-up sexuality that still seems weirdly attractive 'lipping playfully' gah! Also mmmm John was hot, taking the traitors out and being so gentle with Rodney after and the 'octarine flaring flame-blue' around them *happy sigh*.
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Date: 2007-12-25 07:33 pm (UTC)