Pining!John is fantastic. Often he can be a little overdone, but not here -- he's just John who has a secret he's working very hard not to tell, dealing with the pressures of being in Pegasus.
It's your Rodney, though, that stole the show. The way you portrayed quiet longing with that sharp, bitter dialog -- just absolutely fantastic!
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Date: 2007-12-18 05:17 pm (UTC)It's your Rodney, though, that stole the show. The way you portrayed quiet longing with that sharp, bitter dialog -- just absolutely fantastic!