Fic: Unexpected Consequences (McKay/Sheppard, NC-17)

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Title: Unexpected Consequences
Author: goddess47
Recipient: omg_wtf_yeah
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: Oh so very NC-17
Word count: 27,500
Disclaimer: Wish they were mine... sigh
Author's Notes: The request included "John!hookerfic that's more Pretty Woman than My Own Private Idaho. But the ending always has to be happy." That caught my imagination and hope I did it justice.

Thanks to fenchurch1 and mezzo_cammin for their help and feedback. Any mistakes are mine alone.

The Mondrian is a real hotel but amenties and services are pure invention; while I've briefly been to LA most of what I know is Google-fu. Some dialogue taken from Gateworld transcript for The Rising - Part 1

Summary: Leave a message at the tone. "Fuck you, Larry, get a secretary," Rodney sighed tiredly into the phone. "I hope you get this, I'm coming to LA tomorrow – Thursday – so I'll be in your office Thursday afternoon. See you then."

( Unexpected Consequences )

Comments

[sexycazzy.livejournal.com]

Wow - this is really awesome!

and the last line - OMG - made me cry but in a good way!

Loooooooved it!

[goddess47]

Many (late) thanks!

Yeah, that last line came from no where but it fit so well... and it leaves me the possibility of a sequel...

[darkmoore.livejournal.com]

Awwwwww! Loved this. Especially that John was not in fact, a hooker at all. Very nice!

[goddess47]

Many (late) thanks....

Yeah, John's too smart (in my head anyway) to really be a hooker but it was fun to play with him!

[rabidfan.livejournal.com]

Very nice retelling of the beginning of the expedition. Plus? Since I've got about 8,000 words of Hooker!John working myself I have a soft spot for it! Well done.

[goddess47]

Well, then, I have to watch for your hooker!John fic..... ;-) It is a fun place to play!

Many (late) thanks!

[shetiger.livejournal.com]

This was a really good read. The kind that makes me feel like I'm on Christmas vacation for real. :)

[goddess47]

A little fluff is always fun, isn't it?

Many (late) thanks!

[fenchurch1.livejournal.com]

I like the sound of Auntie Nathalie! The true heroine I feel! No really - I enjoyed this again and I like the extras - thank you for making me a part of this (quote from Muppet Christmas Carol!!).

[goddess47]

::grin::

Glad you liked how it turned out and Auntie Nathalie is quite the character!

Thanks!

[taste-is-sweet.livejournal.com]

Lovely, fun, sweet story. I really enjoyed it.

[goddess47]

So glad you liked it...

Many (late) thanks!

[omg-wtf-yeah.livejournal.com]

Oh my gosh! Wow! You really went above and beyond on this! I'm so pleased and happy! Thank you so much, Santa. It was wonderful! ♥♥♥

[goddess47]

And you're welcome... I knew the Pretty Woman thing had already been done much better than I probably could do it, but the hooker!John part of your request really caught my imagination.

Thanks for a great prompt!

[omg-wtf-yeah.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I really enjoyed the story you wrote - I was actually worried whoever got stuck with my prompt wouldn't have anything to go on. And I love MathematicianJohn!! So thank you again!

[saffronhouse.livejournal.com]

Oh, nice! I really liked the way this world keeps getting bigger and bigger, from stressed outRodney hiring an escort to stepping through the stargate!

(and Fleinhart's cameo made me smile and smile)

[goddess47]

Larry and Rodney *had* to know each other. ::nods firmly:: People that brilliant always end up in similar places...

Many (late) thanks!

[aqualegia.livejournal.com]

A fascinating AU of Rising which I couldn't stop reading until I had finished it.

[goddess47]

That's always the nicest thing... when it's compelling enough to draw you in.

Many (late) thanks!

[argosy.livejournal.com]

mmm,that was a fun story to get lost in for a while! I really enjoyed it.

[goddess47]

Oh, I'd love to get lost with those boyz.... LOL

Many (late) thanks!

[dossier.livejournal.com]

thank you, that was a fun read!

[goddess47]

So glad you liked it!

Many (late) thanks!

[cjoelle.livejournal.com]

Very nice story

[goddess47]

Awww.... thanks and so glad you liked it!

[danceswithgary]

I really enjoyed this and was rooting for John to be something more...and then he was! :-D

[goddess47]

The John in my head can pretty much do anything.... ;-)

Many thanks!

[(Anonymous)]

Oh this was great! I loved that twist in the plot where John wasn't really a hooker. I do so hope that you write more in this verse. I'm off to find more of your works! Thanks for a great read.

[lilyleia78]

It took me forever to get to reading this one, but it was well worth the wait! Just a beautiful job of taking the AU and blending it so well into canon.

Thank you so much for sharing.

Unexpected Consequences

[velocitygrass.livejournal.com]

This was lovely.

I loved O'Neill, being a good general in his special way. And poor Rodney, being forced to relax. I'm glad he realized soon that he needed it and that he was so lucky to get George who'd been waiting to meddle with John's love life ;)

Rodney's vacation in LA with John was wonderful with the little moments of getting closer, tying his tie, being domestic, enjoying opera together. They're such a lovely fit, and it was great to see that Rodney took some of that with him, even before John turned up at the SGC.

And of course, I'm happy that John could pull the strings to get him to Atlantis with Rodney :D