ext_75026 ([identity profile] sgasesa-admin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa2009-12-24 07:11 pm

Fic: Everything Changes (And you gotta be ready) (McKay/Sheppard, PG13)

Title: Everything Changes (And you gotta be ready)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] temaris
Recipient: [livejournal.com profile] vanitashaze
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Other: In which I play very fast and loose with canon. Mostly Doctor Who canon :) I saw AU and 'introducing whacky Earth customs to Pegasus' and the rest is, er, fanfic. Many, many thanks to my longsuffering beta-fiend :)

Summary: Sheppard goes missing and Rodney moves heaven and earth to find him.

( Everything Changes (And You Gotta Be Ready) )
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[identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com 2010-01-05 12:35 pm (UTC)(link)
What a wonderful fusion! Neat plot and mystery-really tense, especially in the beginning. Your characterization was superb: Teyla, as she showed Rodney she'd learned a thing or two about technology, The Doctor (both his manic and dark brooding sides), and the Wraith with their arrogant posturing all felt spot-on. I also liked the UNIT folks and how well they meshed with the Lanteans. Leni was a fantastic character and I'm glad you included her. After Teyla's scene with the DHD, my favorite scene was the one where Rodney makes his demands to the SGC, and while the rest of the hierarchy is arguing with him, Daniel Jackson just quietly makes a phone call.....

[identity profile] temaris.livejournal.com 2010-01-05 04:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D I'm so pleased that the characters rang true for you. I really do figure that Teyla and Ronon deserve a lot more credit for brains than they usually get, so I'm glad that worked :) (And I admit, I did rather enjoy the idea of Daniel quietly undermining SGC officialdom, because he so, so would.)