ext_75026 ([identity profile] sgasesa-admin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa2009-12-18 10:42 pm

Fic: qua torva res es (McKay/Sheppard, NC-17)

From [livejournal.com profile] scarlettandblue with love for [livejournal.com profile] silverraven11
The request [livejournal.com profile] silverraven11 made is at the end of the story. I hope I managed to deliver on some of what you wanted.
Beta read by [livejournal.com profile] maaseru who has done the most fabulous job ever under very trying circumstances, i.e., me taking a very long time to write a pretty long story! Thank you so much for all your help.
I also admit I fiddled with it again after it came back from its final beta reading, so any mistakes you spot are all me.

Warnings:
It's a sort of canon AU, in that this is an AU of an AU that canon created. Slash. Swearing and sex and a few owies for our dear boys. So pretty much NC17 I'd say....

Disclaimer:
And of course I don't own John or Rodney (I wish!!) or any of the SGA and SG1 crew,
or any Navajo Tribal Police officers from new Mexico. But playing with them is such fun and you shouldn't sue anyone for having fun, should you?

( qua torva res es )

[identity profile] gail19.livejournal.com 2009-12-22 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
The character voices are so strong. Excellent job making the shrink the bad guy without going to far over the edge. The cat was a lovely touch.

(Anonymous) 2009-12-22 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you
I'm really glad to hear what you had to say about the voices, and a relief to hear that they worked. plus it is so hard not to make the villan a moustache twirler so I'm glad to hear he wasn't over the top. I know when this story turned out to have two POVs I was quite taken aback, imagine my surprise when a third one turned up!! lucky for me that Calico was such a cutie ;-)