ext_1750 ([identity profile] haggitha.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2006-12-28 07:05 pm (UTC)

This was really excellent. I loved the way you moved smoothley from what was going on in Ronon's mind to what John was thinking. The ending itself left me with the feeling that everything would work out the way John wanted it.
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