I LOVE it!! The pace is perfect - I love the suspense and the action. I love how vividly you illustrated McKay's fears. Wow, were his fears intense! The humour was well-placed too. McKay's suspicions that Shep makes up crazy card games on the spot was just too amusing, as was McKay worrying about citris being in the wedding drink and Ronon loving weddings. But the teaminess was the best part. Thank you so much for writing this fic for me!

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