ext_142802 ([identity profile] missrose54.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2006-10-08 12:50 pm (UTC)

Not that I didnt like the story but it often got confusing with the time changing. I would suggest that you offer some background info before you get right back into the story, to establish the time frame.

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