http://schneefink.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] schneefink.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] sga_santa 2011-12-25 11:03 am (UTC)

This is great! Wonderful opening paragraph and it stays that way, with lots of great touches (from John comparing Rodney and his brother, to Cam, Bill, to Ronon greeting John's girlfriend/wife by asking about her knives). I enjoyed it very much.
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