I am so glad that you enjoyed your story! I love the boys, but was nervous about adding an unknown girl. But! It was your Christmas Present! It's nice to actually get what you want. In the end, I really liked Miranda because she's a smart ass. So by default, John would have to like her too. And Rodney? Well, you know Rodney. He'd like her in spite of himself.

I feel I must apologize for the errors, and promise to re-post a cleaned up version with the mistakes removed sometime in the near future.

You think I could wheedle you into writing a sequel? ;) Maybe with Miranda finding out about the boys' base and so? ;)

Uh... I can't make any promises, but I do have some thoughts floating around in the back of my brain. So. Yeah. I'll see if anything percolates.

I can totally picture Ronon in a mosh pit as well but on a hip-hop dance floor? Not so much.

I know! It's all Amelia's fault. In my head, Ronon ends up telling John that Earth dancing is weird, and John laughing and promising to take him somewhere that would be more his speed and then end up at some hard rock/metal/head banger bar, even though that's not John's thing, and Ronon just throws himself into the melee with glee and abandon.