I really love this. I love the left of center feel to it. I think, in the show, the viewer got a lot of Shep's Atlantis so it's really neat to see it from an outsider perspective. Poor Kavanaugh - you did an excellent job of making him sympathetic without forgiving his flaws and I think that made him lovable. I'll admit it - I totally teared up when they were arranging to send Lorne through the Gate.