I really liked your Kavanaugh and his snarkiness. It was great that it was his trying to help the ghostly Lorne that he got to know the people of Atlantis and come to like and respect them.

It made me laugh a lot that Lorne was going to pester Peter into helping him.

I was really afraid that Lorne did die in the end and I mourned him with Peter and then he was alive and they could be together! Woo! Loved the end.