I was very moved by this story. I loved its warmth and humor and the threads of melancholy running through it. I thought your Teyla voice was perfect--it felt like her, but it rounded her out in a way that I wish the show would do. Ronon is a bit more assimilated (in his speech) than I think of him, but I thought his quiet and reserve was right on target. I loved how he and Teyla gradually draw together and I was sad to see it end. I'd love to read more of it.

Thanks for writing and sharing this one.