This fic is so good that it would appeal to shippers and non-shippers alike. Your characterizations of Teyla and Ronon are so good that it's clear that you wrote them as individuals first and then allowed the plot to be woven around them. Your insight into Teyla's feelings of being torn between two worlds and your understanding that Ronon must have come from a technologically advanced world were refreshing to read, especially, since these elements are rarely addressed in fanfic. I wish we could see this type of care for characterization on sceen in Season 3 and beyond.