Oh, marvelous. You've given them, particularly Ronon, a depth of character and a history that, too often, we don't really see too much of on the show itself. The backstory and the idea alone are wonderful, and the writing is just gorgeous. It's a very calm, slow story, very soothing and mellow, and I like it a lot. Thank you for writing this! I think it may become my personal canon, as far as Ronon goes particularly.