I love seeing Ronon and the two worlds of the Atlanteans and the Athosians through Teyla's eyes. Especially -- how you've used Ronon to emphasize the differences between the two, and between Ronon's vanished home which follows him.

Here, Ronon is more at home with technology than I've seen him before, but it works in the context of the story, and he's much more three-dimensional as a result.

Well done -- the title so fits.