I am so excited that you liked this. *beams* I had a great time imagining this world, and that the visual descriptions shone through is wonderful. I wanted Melena's story to be a bit fairy tale-ish, except without the happy ending, and feeling the weight (exactly!) of something that she cannot control. Very happy that the young love innocence came through too, and oh, I know. RONON.

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback.