I loved the world you built in this, the descriptions were beautiful (I hate to think of all that must have been destroyed, after). but it's not the time to think of that and I loved your take on Melena, who has to live with the weight of an old prophecy and Ronon who just cares about her, the beautiful young girl. you describe youth and innocence really well, and it makes my heart hurt for Ronon who lost so much.