Absolutely wonderful! Your story has a sure, strong tone even while Keller has her feelings of insecurities. I also really loved the way you introduced the pairings. I liked that Keller was a little bit oblivious -- both about John and Rodney's feelings for each other and her own feelings about Ronon -- and the way they sort of became clear to her. Lovely description. I also loved the hint of jealous!John in there. So cute. ;) Beautiful story. I really enjoyed it!